I have decided to add some of my poetry. I would love some creative feedback, or just general feedback. Thanks.

something passed through me,

and passed on.

where was it before?

where did it go on?

where is here?

when is now?

did something that was not me ever arrive?

did something that was not me ever depart? ­­­­­­­­­

first i thought: "we make our own conspiracies".

then i thought: "there are no conspiracies"

then i thought: "there is no we"

now i don't think i know. ­­­­­­­­­&am p;am p;sh y;

who are we?

i cannot speak for you: you cannot speak for me.

ought one speak for we?

someone i do not know says "we": i listen very carefully.

when i fight with words, words win.

who are We?

i cannot speak for you; you cannot speak for me.

ought one speak for We?

who are We?

when someone i don't know says "We" i listen extra carefully;

We are not who We seem to be.

We have a control infrastructure

which might assume you and subsume you

but We are not you.

We exist only in your mind.

only you can speak for you;

ought one speak for We?

who are We?

if you think you know,

then who are you?

if We exist, then do They?

what do they think of you?

if you met each other in the street

you would have many options which were not defeat

and many causes for common ground I suspect.

the suspicion is mutual and also

can be easily undermined.

in the interests of mutual security

We ask that you bear with the inconvenience.

We are attempting to saturate your lives with information.

We are writing a program to introduce you

to ideas that are not of your own thinking.

ideas that distract and penetrate you,

that can potentially induce or impair self reflection

mutual direction and an increased coherence.

Once again, we apologise for the inconvenience.